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9U: To Attack Us, pt. 1-3 by Jenny-Jen 9U: To Attack Us, pt. 1-3 by Jenny-Jen
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"The wrong way! You went in a huge circle, I can't believe it!"

The familiar laughter reached 9's sensors and he opened his optics, sighing in annoyance. He was having his recurring dream again. The one where he talked to his old friends.

The spirit of 1 seemed to be taking delight in the schadenfreude of the situation. 9 had never seen him so elated. Their old leader was doubled over with laughter, and 8 was joining in with his own booming baritones.

"It's really not that funny ..." 5 stepped forward and placed a ghostly green hand on 9's shoulder. "I'm sorry, 9. Maybe you could have done with a map?"

"'Maybe' is a little too late right now I'm afraid, 5." 9 shot 1 and 8 a stern look as they began to calm down. "But I am putting things right."

"Going to lead them in a circle in the other direction?" 8 snickered.

9 ignored the laughing Stitchpunks as they turned away, disappearing into the inky black emptiness of his dream and leaving only 5, 2 and 6 for company.

"Don't worry, my boy." 2 tried to stand up straight, a little rickety. "You’ll find a way around it. I knew you had that spark in you, from the moment I first laid eyes on you."

"Good luck." 5 reassured his friend and beckoned for them to follow him again. 2 did so, but 6 lingered back, waiting until they were out of earshot before turning to 9 and placing his ink-covered hands on his shoulders.

"Don't, don't worry 9. You're on the right path. Y-you're close!"

"Close?" He blinked. "Close to what?"

6 simply smiled, and his face faded from view, which meant only one thing to 9 ...



... He was waking up.


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Thewolfone Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
the sooooooooooooooooooooooooooorce comon we all know 6 is thinking it
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Kaliko08 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
WWAAAAAA sad memeries!
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Rikky-Bubbles Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010
Man, 6 was always so........interesting and sort of........magical? Like that
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Piddies0709 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
They won't be ghosts for very long once Terpackins through with them.TO RESURRECT US!!!!!!!
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Edwardwolfie3 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
wow. this is just amazing.
I've never bothered to read much of anything on DA, but this is just. epic.
If only this could be made into a sequel of the movie, it would work perfectly!!!
id cry tears...tears of blood if that happened. ;u;
youre amazing! *u*
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SharpieSam Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
p.s
love how you drew the spirits!
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Jenny-Jen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks so much! :love:
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SharpieSam Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Youre welcome!
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SharpieSam Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweet. I cant wait!
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kagefox Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
I had a very similar idea about the "ghosts" and dreams in my own shitty FF. It somewhat reminds me of StarClan in the Warrior Cats series in the way they communicate to him.
Though I would have to critize on the antagonization of 1 and 8 because they really wern't that bad - though 1 would totally enjoy this misfortune of 9 XD But for the sake of the story it might have been unnessisary, unless you where to take it somewhere interesting like evil, evel 1 and 8 haunting him; that would be interesting but I doubt that's where the story's going. Of course I should be one to talk because I love making 1 the villian, hurrr... C:
I felt like being a critic, sorry about the rant
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fantacyfreak Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010   Photographer
1 you jerk! Like you did a better job!
All you did was sit on his ass all-day-long!
At least 9 is trying
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Taybrian1 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Too bad 9 can't kick 1 and 8s' ghostly butts. They have no room to talk!
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Angelcuti Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Student
Huh? I'm surrounded...by fallen voices!
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crazydiary86 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Now he also has hallucinations...
What will happen now?
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edwarts47 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Whoa! O_o Love it.) Great work, Jen!))
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Wall-eROX24-7 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
dang it! I wanna hug 9 right now!!! :iconeeeeeplz:
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RaidenRaccoon Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
9 needs a freakin' hug, darn it!

Intriguing chapter, btw! ~I wonder what 6 means >w>
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Tifa-the-Strange Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
:cling:
9 ;-;
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fitedapowah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
YAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PART THREE IZ HEER!It's really refreshing to aactually see some of the original characters from 9.
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AdoobibullTwin4 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
This is so cute! They all look so adorable. Nice work! :)
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All-Stitched-up Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Poor 9 he never gets a break, love your story 8D
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Mad-But-Happy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Professional Filmographer
I love how you did the ghosts :D Poor pouty 9 D: *hugs him*
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NeroStreet Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Professional Filmographer
D'awww, what a sad part. :C Poor 9. *Hugs him*

I really love the artwork here. Really nice ghostly effect, and I really love the overall feel of the pic. Simple, but extremely effective.

Nicely done!
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EternallyOptimistic Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Love the picture - and love that you brought the other characters back, and totally IC!
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Socks-and-Notebooks Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Hey, do see that puddle of pink goo on the floor? Yeah, that used to be my heart. It just melted.
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mariekelikestodrawn Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student General Artist
Aww, 9 dreams of the others. I must admit that made me tear up a little bit. :')

Superb art and writework as usual! :clap::+fav:
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This is so good! I think it's my favorite page so far.
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Baudelaire-Nightmare Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student General Artist
Ooooooo~ The ghosts~
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TigerFlare Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Close to the others, smartypants! What do you think? XD

This is excellent! I love their expressions and the ghostly feel of 5 and 6 in the picture. Poor 9... Maybe a little reassurance would turn that frown upside down. :)
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JACKSPICERCHASE Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
naaa~ ;__; I especially love the little text there~
I suck at giving comments but let me tell you : I love every single line of this picture~ 8'D
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meg15warrior Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student General Artist
poor 5 and 6 and 8 and 1 and 2.:( i really like the colors in this picture. great job:D but its a sad moment:(
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